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 \chapter{Introduction}
 
-After every practice or dance-out, the musicians of Cry Havoc Botley
-Morris like to have a little music-playing session. And, of course,
-the musicians provide the music we dance to.
+Music forms a core part of Cry Havoc Botley Morris. Of course, the
+musicians provide the music we dance to. And after every practice or
+dance-out, there is a music-playing session.
 
 Havoc musicians come in all shades of experience and ability.
 This collection is intended to help those like me who are inexpert with