--- a/Session/BattleOfTheSomme.abc	Wed Mar 27 10:48:23 2019 +0000
+++ b/Session/BattleOfTheSomme.abc	Wed Mar 27 13:48:14 2019 +0000
@@ -2,10 +2,10 @@
 T: Battle of the Somme
 C: Pipe Major William Laurie
 B: "Army Manual of Bagpipe Tunes and Drum Beatings. Music for Massed Pipes and Drums, Book 2" 1934
-H:Dottes: William Laurie became Pipe Major of the 8th Argyllshire Battalion
-H:+ of the Argyll and Sutherland Highlanders in 1914. He served with them
-H:+ in France from 1915 to 1916 when he became ill as a result of
-H:+ trench conditions. He was invalided to England where he died in
+H:Dottes: William Laurie was Pipe Major of the 8th Argyllshire Battalion
+H:+ of the Argyll and Sutherland Highlanders in 1914.
+H:+ Posted to France in 1915, he became ill in 1916 due to
+H:+ trench conditions. Invalided to England, he died in
 H:+ the Third Southern General Hospital in Oxford aged 35, one of
 H:+ piping's greatest premature losses.
 M: 9/8