changeset 389:00720ea5c474

Improve the writing of the Session blurb.
author Jim Hague <jim.hague@acm.org>
date Sun, 01 Sep 2013 20:35:46 +0100
parents 502fa2df300e
children 0f3b58661103
files Session/intro.txt
diffstat 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) [+]
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--- a/Session/intro.txt	Sat Aug 31 00:38:48 2013 +0100
+++ b/Session/intro.txt	Sun Sep 01 20:35:46 2013 +0100
@@ -6,8 +6,7 @@
 
 The set of tunes played at sessions does tend to vary over time. Some
 tunes are perennial favourites and so are included here automatically.
-Others are less regular, and so their inclusion is to some extent a
-personal choice. I aim to only include tunes that I remember hearing at
-a session in the not too distant past, but nobody keeps a detailed log
-of what gets played, so the choice is imprecise. And may well be influenced
-by personal preference.
+Others appear less regularly. I aim to only include tunes that I
+remember hearing at a session in the not too distant past, but nobody
+keeps a log of what gets played, so the choice is imprecise. And may
+well be influenced by personal preference.